Reflections on Transfigured Sea: A Conversation About the Opening Chapters

November 28, 2024

Hearing others discuss Transfigured Sea offers me new insights into the story I’ve crafted. Recently, I listened to an intriguing conversation about the novel’s opening chapters, and I’d love to share some of their reflections—and my own thoughts—with you.

The Beach: Nature as a Mirror

The discussion began with Laura’s walk along the beach. I’ve always seen this scene as more than a description of nature. The ghost crabs, sand hoppers, and sea turtles all hold meaning—symbols of caution, trust, and vulnerability. The crabs in particular, provide insight into Daphne’s character. It was interesting to hear the conversation participants connect these creatures to the Sea Sprite’s wary nature, avoiding confrontation and Laura’s longing for emotional connection.

Rocky Shores and Emotional Shifts

The participants also explored the dramatic shift in setting when Laura encounters the jagged rocks and crashing waves, tying this to her traumatic flashback about her mother. For me, this scene captures how memory and place can intertwine. The sounds and visuals stimulate a certain awareness which Laura cannot deny. The harsh imagery echoes Laura’s internal conflict, shaped by her mother’s rejection of poetry and rejection of even Laura herself and the controlling environment of Laura’s childhood.

The Ocean’s Role

What I appreciated most about their discussion was how they recognised the ocean as more than a backdrop. The ocean is in fact, as significant as any other character in the book. In Transfigured Sea, each marine environment reflects the emotional layers of the characters—from the beauty of the beach to the turbulence of the rocky shore.

Looking Ahead

I am thrilled that they are planning to explore the estuary next, a setting that delves even deeper into the complexities of relationships. I cannot wait to hear how they interpret its symbolism and connections to Laura’s journey.

If you have read the novel, I would love to hear your thoughts on these themes. What resonated with you? Share your reflections in the comments below and be sure to watch the video of this wonderful discussion.

Sally Ann Hunter

Sally Ann Hunter is a biologist and environmental policy officer (BSc [Biol], MEnv Sts.). She has published a collection of poetry called The Structure of Light and a biography called You Can’t Keep a Good Man Down: from Parkinson’s to a New Life with Deep Brain Stimulation.

A paper she wrote on the biography, was read on ABC Radio’s Ockham’s Razor, as was a paper on living with solar power.

She completed a ten-month course called Manuscript Incubator at Writers SA. Also at Writers SA, she did Poetry Studio on Zoom with Jill Jones over several months.

A novel called Transfigured Sea, (Nature Writing) was published in 2022 and another called Golden Cups (Historical Fiction) is in the process of publisher’s revision.

A number of her poems have been published in anthologies and online. She lives in the Adelaide Hills where she gains inspiration for much of her Nature Writing.

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